Sample Work

Posted Fri, 01/15/2010 - 17:29

Here are some examples of our handiwork for customers who ordered "Renovate".

Apu Agheer: Human Resources
Before:
- Lots of unnecessary private information being made available
- Problems with grammar and tense usage
- Poor organization of information
- Excessive length most likely to bore readers
After:
- Business-oriented and concise
- Proves knowledge of targeting particular niches of clientele
- Shows initiative and understanding of business impact

Sent to ResumeGuru on December 15, 2009.
Completed on December 19, 2009.
New job attained on January 2, 2010.

John Fuzell: Student/Intern
Before:
- Irrelevant personal extracurricular activities
- Poor formatting and punctuation usage
- Inconsistent grammar usage
After:
- Ideas properly fleshed out
- Value proposition made clear
- Skill set easy to identify

Sent to ResumeGuru on December 23, 2009.
Completed on December 26, 2009.
New job attained on January 10, 2010.

Melinda Kate: Project Manager, Supply Chain / Business
Before:
- Incorrect narrative voice
- Too short to provide substantiation of value
- Certain personal information present may cause discrimination
After:
- Clear demonstration of results
- Skills appropriately described in context
- Discriminatory information removed

Sent to ResumeGuru on December 3, 2009.
Completed on December 8, 2009.
New job attained on December 30, 2009.

Demetri Nikodakis: Project Manager, Electrical Engineering
Before:
- Extremely verbose and repetitive
- Typographical errors present
- Bad sentence structure and flow
- Irrelevant extracurricular activities
After:
- Redundant information removed
- Typographical errors resolved
- Business value made apparent