Sample Resume of Mid-Career Candidate in Military and Civil Services Industry
Matteo is a successful ex-US special forces military veteran. With over 3 years of experience in land-based military operations and an honorable discharge, he was looking for something new and exciting to protect. Unfortunately, his resume was riddled with bulletholes of inconclusive talents and tactical not-so-exploits. The top three issues identified with his resume included:
1) Descriptive language without justification
2) Repetitive, boring terminology
3) Lack of strategy and business value
Melinda is a successful supply chain / information technology executive; with over four years of experience managing strategies, clients, and consulting programs. However, while Melinda could handle the stress of managing multi-million dollar budgets, her resume could not. When she found herself searching for a new career, after over thirty years at her past position; it was clear her resume was outdated and incapable of highlighting her extremely competitive skill set. The top three issues identified with her resume included:
Demetri is an extremely intelligent electrical engineer; with over 15 years of experience managing projects, acquiring relevant goods, and forecasting production finances. However, when Microsoft caught his extremely-qualified eye, his resume was less than qualified to showcase his experience and skills. The top four issues with his resume included:
1) Extremely verbose and repetitive language
2) Typographical errors
3) Bad sentence structure and flow
4) Irrelevant extracurricular activities
